martes, 10 de marzo de 2015

SELECTIVIDAD - COMPOSITION: TALKING ABOUT ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES

Se pueden añadir expresiones como:

VENTAJAS:
The main advantage is...
There are other advantages in connection with...
I would say there are more advantages than drawbacks...

DESVENTAJAS:
The main disadvantage is...
There are other problems in connection with...
I would say there are more drawbacks than advantages.

Although some more advantages can be mentioned, the disadvantages about ... are more evident.  On the one hand.... on the other hand...Finally...
 
SAMPLE COMPOSITION
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages you find in homeworking
When considering the option of working at home I can find both advantages and disadvantages. Not having to commute to your workplace each morning is a definite advantage because on the one hand, you can save money on transport.  On the other hand, the stress of the rush hour can be avoided. Moreover, being able to eat at home,   is both cheaper and healthier.

However, I would say there are more drawbacks than advantages.  I can find different reasons to support this. Firstly, because having to organize your own time means  having two essential qualities that not everybody has: self-discipline and good organization.  Secondly,   working at home could also mean more distractions and taking more breaks than necessary. Finally, although the new technologies makes social contact easily, working  at home  means working alone, which could be considered as an important drawback.

In conclusion,  I think that I would prefer the stress of the rush hour with the allicient of having the support and companionship of colleagues.


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